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from florida with loveyou are an unstable constant in my life
there is no promise of you in daybreak
and there is no lingering trace of you at night.
for three years of my life you were there
i could depend on you to house me
to feed me, to take care of me. 
but then i left because i didn't know
i didn't know what it would be like away
from your blistering chill and your great cooking. 
i have returned to you twice a year
ten years i hope you'll accept me once more
one week i hope it can feel natural again.
you send me away with bags packed and car humming
you do not plead for me to stay by your side
you leave no parting words between us. 
i cry for you every week and i'm not ashamed
i curse you before i sleep, clutching my pillow
and before i sleep i smell the garlic and coffee scent. 
i do not love the paradise you love
i hate the palm trees and i hate the sun
i hate hurricane season and i hate sandy beaches. 
i love the snow you complain about
i love burnt tongues from too hot ho
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love doesn't come with a get out of jail free card0. 
Love
was supposed to mean
holy matrimony
and not
despising
the body next to you.
Love
wasn't meant to be
broken promises,
lying
about if it's a friends house
or your current affair.
Love
shouldn't withstand this - 
and it sure as hell wouldn't - 
if we (i) could try
honesty.
1.
Scurry to lock the door.
Toy-of-the-week has arrived.
Cover Barbies eyes.
We're doing thing she and Ken
could only dream about. 
I'm plastic and you're
perfectly chiseled to fit 
my plastic dreams. 
Rush out the window.
Put the ring back on.
Return to the kitchen.
Cover up sex with Chanel.
["You seem happier."]
("I met up with a friend.")
2. 
Bottles
of alcohol
beging to clutter
the floors of the office. 
Cigar
slipped between finger and
trigger.
Escape.
Sweet escape in the arms
of cheap booze and tobacco. 
Survive one more night,
one more lie. 
This is what suburbias about,
right?
3. 
Crack of a whip.
Bruises to show.
Love games can only
go so far befor
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hungry is synonymous for weaki measure my worth
in pounds and ounces
reflected 
by the glow of
my bathroom scale. 
refuse to eat
too much
even when
my stomach yearns
for the satisfaction
of a real meal. 
50 crunches
2300 calories 
becomes
100 crunches
2000 calories
i was never
pretty
beautiful
hot
or stunning
when my BMI
was insanely high.
as i lose
weight
(control)
i gain
friends
confidence
(concern)
skip breakfast
granola for lunch
and vegetables for dinner.
am i pretty enough yet?
count each calorie
i insert
if it reaches 1000
i've had too much.
restrict
restrict
restrict



    a
        t
is a four letter word
that i constantly
obsess over.
reject the chocolate
be proud of the prominent
collar bones
hip bones
cheek bones
thin and skinny 
mean well 
when you become others
(th)inspiretation
no one suspects
problems like this
from
the star athlete
the class genius
the brilliant actress
they expect it from
the ba
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american dreamMy father was spoon-fed 
the American Dream,
chin dripping Old Glory,
from the day he was born. 
He regurgitates lessons 
from past generations
about how fortunate we are here,
in the land of opportunity, dreams,
freedom.
A bug immigrant grandparents caught
in the wake of wars and poverty
that soon infected their children.
That later blinded my father. 
My mother - an immigrant
with anger in her veins and
the truth in her gut - 
never got bit. 
She saw through the lies,
the puppets on strings,
fighting them with words and expressions.
She pleads the first. 
And for years we have tried
to remove the veil from his eyes
and awaken his senses.
He never sees.
He never sees how
opportunity turned to debt
dreams are in the forms of welfare checks
freedom has never been for the masses. 
There is no more opportunity
when jobs cannot be created
and forty-somethings return to their parents.
There's no room for dreams
when money must be made
and the bills ar
in Faves-Of-The-Week!Welcome to FOTW! I'm sorry this is so late. I spilled coffee on my computer a few days back and it is fried. So I have limited time to post or find faves. Let's dive right in. 

I loved the honest integrity of this piece, though it may seem strange to say. There's a ridiculously small amount of writers willing to admit being favorable to what most of the world might consider 'geeky'...but is simply just a different personality. The subtle humor in this poem was refreshing and heartwarming. Very nicely done. 

Again, I love the 'crazy God' complex. At times, I agree with this poem completely. There's an all knowing being out there that supposedly knows everything that is and was and shall be, but he still let's all this f*cked up stuff happen to us and to the world around us. "With such a beautifully sadistic sense of humor." God as a sadist. Yes, I completely agree. Wonderful work. 
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down in wonderlandyou were king.
a god amongst men,
ruling with easy smiles,
friendly eyes,
and gentle authority. 
we were weak.
spineless creatures, mortals.
bending to every whim,
every whisper,
of those far greater. 
the world was viewed from
rose-colored lenses whenever
you decided to grace us
with your humble
presence.
how we would cheer.
we would bow,
kiss the dirt at your boot.
pathetic. 
lips touching dust always
a l w a y s
left a bitter taste. 
we were revolutionaries.
your reign was tight.
you took what women you pleased,
killed the men that were threats.
if it wasn't yours
oh, 
how you longed for it.
(only if it was hand delivered
on a gold platter
inscribed with the finest jewels)
we grew weary.
we were overworked,
hungry.
the lens began to slip off.
everything was seen in green.
green for disease,
for greed,
for envy. 
we were peasants,
we were promised whats was yours
was ours. 
you never expected it.
the swish of a cloak,
the slip of a sword,
a d
playing pretend shaped us to thisI am smoke filled lungs
that hack away, trying
to escape their latest hell.
I am wise beyond my years
only to those who's existence
is as long as mine. 
I am wild, unruly hair
and quick nimble feet.
Both belong to the wind.
I remind myself of
flightless birds, hoping
and dreaming but never achieving. 
I quite possibly am
a fuse lit on both ends.
Just wait for the explosion. 
I am chipping nail polish
that's lazy for a recolor. 
My color is barely-there pink.
I am salt water and buried
toes in beach sand. Welcoming
to those who brave the tides.
I am snow and hot cocoa.
Parts impossibly cold and
scalding to the touch. 
I am your favorite CD.
Welcoming, with you treasured
hits. Please give me a listen. 
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here is the art feature from my last journal <3
don't worry about the order, this has nothing to do with how I stand to your art <3
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icarus would have preferred a death like thisi want to feel
hushed mantra, 
replayed over and over
like the broken records of old.
the crushed grass
being blown by the
sea-salt tainted wind.
i want to feel
only lights are provided by stars
(and the light of middle aged man
and woman's dimly lit bedroom.
it is nine p.m. on a friday
it is their bedtime)
less and less come out
while the stakes of this game,
this tool,
increases with every whimpered breath.
i want to feel
the hits sting numb skin.
they resonate loud through suburbia. 
they leave no marks except for shame.
suffocating shame. 
gentle whispers coach the night.
less, more, less, more, stop, mm.
hair in knots and blue jeans dying green.
degrading. degrading in every fashion.
within ten minutes, the shop is closed.
silence returns and if you squint your eyes,
cock your head to the side,
you can almost feel at ease. 
i've felt too much
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This is a very late response, and I apologize...I haven't been really active here lately...but I wanted to thank you for the favorites! :heart: And tell you that you are quite lovely.
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