literature

humid liberty

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skip the showers and let
the flowers bloom instead.

we become the choir of
the King's speech,
running out of sweltering rooms.

Free at last,
yet we're too young
to claim its permanence.
The title sucks but it was the best I could think of. Open to suggestions. 

Something I found while I was going through my stash trying to find something else. I like it a whole lot. I'd say it's about a year old? Something along those lines. 
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LadyBitterblue's avatar
It's gorgeous. :heart: Love how you structured it and how the sentences flow. (The title doesn't really fit the tone of the poem well, as you wrote, but I can't think of anything better, either. :p)